i have a packet for you
something you might need
it was the love you gave me
before you disappeared.
thinking you might need it
i’ve parcelled it for you
I have no further need of it
a love that has been used
but i’ve kept a souvenir
just a very little part
to replace what you have taken-
a portion of my heart.
Tuesday 21 August 2012
Sunday 22 April 2012
On reflection
On reflection
Mother was just Mother or so it seemed to me,
she got us up for breakfast and was there again for tea
On Fridays she did baking because father worked till eight,
and we would fight to get the bowl in which she mixed the cake.
We always had a Sunday roast, which made lots of washing up,
and then appeared on Monday as jackets with cold cuts;
Tuesdays she went shopping so dinner was a treat,
it had to be something quick to cook and often quick to eat;
Most days we had puddings all made by Mother’s hand,
but we never did appreciate how much it all was planned,
She’d sit and write a list of meals to have the coming week
and fill in Wrenson’s grocer’s book with anything we’d need.
The milkman came each morning, the grocery midweek,
and vegetables from Raybold’s van parked out in the street.
Laundry went on Wednesday after all the beds were changed,
because when we were little we didn’t have machines.
She made our clothes for Sundays, matching frocks when we were young,
gradually she taught us how to make our own.
She’d listen to the wireless when we had gone to bed
but what she thought of life we never asked, she never said.
She didn’t seem to have ambition and was content with life
she was a diligent and happy married wife;
she never seemed to ask for anything for herself,
only so much later when she wasn’t in good health
She was very good with money, she knew where every penny went
and she planned it very carefully and never overspent.
She got a little job when I was aged fifteen;
I think she wanted more from life than to sit at home and dream
She was very quick with numbers, and tidying the house,
I wonder if she would have liked to work or at least the chance to choose.
In the early fifties after men had been demobbed
to give them work women were required to give up jobs,
they had to work for men if allowed to stay;
it was before the age of equal opportunity and pay.
Men ruled in the workplace, women ruled the home
but did they both get what they wanted before their time was done?
Did you ever think to ask your mum if she’d made the most of life,
not being her own woman but someone else’s wife?
Did she feel that life had given her the chance to shine,
I’ll never know because it’s something that I never did ask mine?
Mother was just Mother or so it seemed to me,
she got us up for breakfast and was there again for tea
On Fridays she did baking because father worked till eight,
and we would fight to get the bowl in which she mixed the cake.
We always had a Sunday roast, which made lots of washing up,
and then appeared on Monday as jackets with cold cuts;
Tuesdays she went shopping so dinner was a treat,
it had to be something quick to cook and often quick to eat;
Most days we had puddings all made by Mother’s hand,
but we never did appreciate how much it all was planned,
She’d sit and write a list of meals to have the coming week
and fill in Wrenson’s grocer’s book with anything we’d need.
The milkman came each morning, the grocery midweek,
and vegetables from Raybold’s van parked out in the street.
Laundry went on Wednesday after all the beds were changed,
because when we were little we didn’t have machines.
She made our clothes for Sundays, matching frocks when we were young,
gradually she taught us how to make our own.
She’d listen to the wireless when we had gone to bed
but what she thought of life we never asked, she never said.
She didn’t seem to have ambition and was content with life
she was a diligent and happy married wife;
she never seemed to ask for anything for herself,
only so much later when she wasn’t in good health
She was very good with money, she knew where every penny went
and she planned it very carefully and never overspent.
She got a little job when I was aged fifteen;
I think she wanted more from life than to sit at home and dream
She was very quick with numbers, and tidying the house,
I wonder if she would have liked to work or at least the chance to choose.
In the early fifties after men had been demobbed
to give them work women were required to give up jobs,
they had to work for men if allowed to stay;
it was before the age of equal opportunity and pay.
Men ruled in the workplace, women ruled the home
but did they both get what they wanted before their time was done?
Did you ever think to ask your mum if she’d made the most of life,
not being her own woman but someone else’s wife?
Did she feel that life had given her the chance to shine,
I’ll never know because it’s something that I never did ask mine?
Monday 12 March 2012
Saturday 25 February 2012
Falling
Falling water
falling rain
falling tears
falling out again
falling down
things fall apart
a fallen angel
broke my heart
people fall asleep
some fall out of bed
people fall out of favour
some fall down dead
people fall for what is said
people fall under a bus
some fall by the wayside
but that's not us
some fall under your spell
that's me, it's true
and now i'm in freefall
falling in love with you
falling rain
falling tears
falling out again
falling down
things fall apart
a fallen angel
broke my heart
people fall asleep
some fall out of bed
people fall out of favour
some fall down dead
people fall for what is said
people fall under a bus
some fall by the wayside
but that's not us
some fall under your spell
that's me, it's true
and now i'm in freefall
falling in love with you
Wednesday 1 February 2012
Off the top of my head....
Off
the top of my head I wouldn’t have said
there’s
a shred of a chance of my winning
but
I love using words and though it’s
perverse
I’m
particularly fond of punning
I’ve
just finished a course on how to write verse
and
if I don’t try then I’ll never know
If
I’ve learned to express unlike anyone else
an
image that’s really quite stunning.
When
I’m by myself I just can’t stop
this
verbal diahorrea which you’re going to hear
but
if you’re at home and can read it alone
you
can cast it aside if you can’t abide it, and I’ll never know
So….
What’s
it to be will you give me a chance to woo you with words
that
I’ve crafted and honed to a poem that has something to say
and
no-one else has written in verse
in
quite the same way that I want to say it?
I’d
play it cool but I’m such a virgin
I’
m urging you to read me through and give me a chance.
read
me out loud to a crowd or a few
in
the bath, in the garden wherever appeals
What
do poets do when they get a day
of
inspiration when they want to say something in verse
do
you rush for your pen or your computer
do
you pester your friends or your publisher?
I know
the given is not to plunge in but to let it settle,
read
it again, ‘frisk every word’ to see what it’s saying
remove
’ buts’ and ‘ands’ just there for the rhythm;
a
double adjective’s quite a sin,
a
descriptive verb is best put in.
Don’t
forget if you’re reading aloud
syllable
count is not seen by the crowd
the
words will just flow and mingle together,
what
you need to decide when you have finished
is
could you diminish the number of verses
don’t
hesitate, deviate or repeat yourself
or
yours is the poem that is left on the shelf.
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